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A Jewish heroine who transforms into a spitely golem has trouble fitting in.

A little later than I intended, but still before the night ended. So I’ll call it a win.

This took on a life of its own over the weekend and much of today was making cuts as I tried to get this down to size. That said, I still feel like I’m a little off from the point I wanted to hit with this. Like, I had a vision for this story and this is close, but I feel like I do not quite have the practice to pull the full power out of this premise. I would really like to hear what you all think of this one as this is part of me trying to prove transformation themes are more than just a vehicle for absurd sexy times.

I plan to write more about Avia and Naomi, so feedback about them makes it easier for me to get back to them (this is true for any characters really). Knowing what you like (or hate) about a character, story, or setting means I have a target to hit on the next time. If you do nothing else for me, send me feedback.

Anyway, enjoy!

Contains: Lesbian pairing, shrinking, mini-gts, interracial couple, no sex, developing relationship, super hero antics, flesh to stone transformation
Word Count: 4952

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